My writing

Here is some of follow up writing from the mystery box where we had a old suitcase and we had to image what was inside. Here is my favorite paragraph  

The mystery box

  Ring ring ring. What was that? Ring ring ring. There it was again, well I better go get it.  I crept  down the musty mouldy old stairs so as not to wake the others up. The postman was short and had a small moustache curling round his chubby chin, and his moles were as big as my fist. I asked him  what he wanted he said “I bring a package for mademoiselle Adalane”. Wait that's me! “Well mademoiselle I am here to do my job, so please sign here”, Ohhh okay I said lost for words. At that time I was thinking wait I never get packages. “Well My girl thank you and goodbye”

By Harriet

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