Here is a paragraph of a narrative I have been writing. The plot of the story is that she changes into someone shes not and gets involved with the wrong crowd at school. I hope you like it.
My name is Aria. Aria Bree Stratford. Welcome to my diary. This is the first page in this disgusting pink book. Trust me I don't want to do this either. It's an assignment for school over the break, school aye! Speaking of school, I hate it. I just started my freshman year of highschool. New school, new people, new classes and no friends. Well that was until the other day when the “popular kids” came over and invited me to hang out with them. They thought they could see “potential” in me. I don't really like hanging out with them but it will have to do. I expect we will be moving soon anyway. Oh yes, I forgot to mention. My dads a marine officer so we move around. A lot. It kinda sucks because the moment we get settled somewhere we have to move again. My mums not really around anymore. She left not long after I was born, but she turns up occasionally. Last I heard of her she was drinking Margaritas and lying on the beach in bikinis. Some island somewhere. Sometimes people make fun of me for not having a mum. But i don't really care. My dad and I get on just fine by ourselves. Well our dog Max comes everywhere with us as well. Because of my dad's work I have lived all round the world. Australia, England, New Zealand and Fiji just to name a few. Each place owns a little bit of my heart. I love travelling, cooking, horse riding, swimming and kayaking. Uh this is so boring! This school is one of the worst ones I have been to. I mean, the school is fine but the people are just. They are the kinda people that make you feel like you aren’t welcome.
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