My Silent Writing

Welcome back to my blog. Today I have a piece of my SUW to share with you. For People who don't know what it is SUW is Silent uninterpreted writing. We do this for 10 mins after lunch.  Here is my writing:

THE GIRL WHO WAS STOLEN 

Olivia Hunter was just like any other girl. Olivia had long curly blonde hair, big bright blue eyes and a huge smile.  Her blonde hair was always tied back in a long plait with a different color ribbon at the end of the beautiful plait (The ribbon would be a different color every single day) . Her eyes were the color of the deep dark ocean.  Olivia wore a different dress each day, today it was a sky blue dress that matched her ribbon. It was a knee long dress with a sweetheart neckline that showed her long, muscled legs. As Well as her arms.

Splosh splish splash. The rain plummeted down on the roof of the high building Oliva called home. She picked up the black glossy TV remote and flashed it at one of the new smart Tv that was hanging on the wall in her room. The Tv turned onto the news channel,  they were talking about some kidnapper that was going around town trying to take all the pretty girls that fathers worked for the bank. Olivia stopped, she was one of these girls. No One had ever called her rich but anyone who worked at the bank was rich. Even Olivia knew that.

Olivia fell backwards onto her big double bed, just as the phone rang. She picked up her shiny pink I phone 7 and slid the button to answer.  She read the name at the top of the phone and gasped. It was the name that had killed her best friend in the world.

Thanks for reading. for those people that want to see a part 2 I will post a few more paragraphs soon.

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